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[Naruto] Itachi x Naruto: Alpha

Community: 1sentence
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Itachi x Naruto
Theme Set: Alpha
Rating: PG13 to NC17
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Summary: 50 sentences for 1sentence. Written in 2nd Person POV for Itachi.

Theme Set: Alpha
Itachi x Naruto

#01 - Comfort:

Your kindness only extends far enough to pause as he empties his stomach of the meager breakfast he had; then, you lead him away from the bodies of the shinobi he had not meant to kill.

#02 - Kiss:

His lips press against yours in a silent, desperate plea for affection, and though you do not push him away, you do not hold him any closer.

#03 - Soft:

The vessel of the Kyuubi melts at your touch and the demon within hates you for it.

#04 - Pain:

A muffled cry slips through the cage of his fingers; when you thrust into that trembling body again, something tears inside him as something rips within you.

#05 - Potatoes:

"Eat them or starve," you reply flatly, and he flinches.

#06 - Rain:

Something stops inside your chest when the shower of needles pierce his body, and when he emerges unscathed, you have to remind yourself that you don't care.

#07 - Chocolate:

"You can have it," you say, tossing the entire box to him carelessly, so he would not suspect; his eyes light up anyway.

#08 - Happiness:

He thinks that what he has with you is happiness; you know he could do better- too bad he doesn't.

#09 - Telephone:

Once, you left him alone with a telephone, just to see what he'd do; then you realized that he hadn't a clue how to use the damn thing.

#10 - Ears:

The farther away from Konoha the two of you get, the quieter he becomes; still, he does not bode well with silence and occasionally, he'll muster up the courage to whisper: "Can you hear me?"

#11 - Name:

"What about a 'dizzy weasel'?" you ask dangerously, and Naruto stutters under your glare as Kisame roars with laughter.
(Note: Uzumaki=whirlpool and Itachi=weasel.)

#12 - Sensual:

He'll have that one moment of ecstasy before pain and guilt shame him into tears.

#13 - Death:

The first time he killed a man, he lost his voice; the next day, you have him cut the throat of his former teammate, Haruno Sakura, and you knew he was cured by his scream.

#14 - Sex:

Sex between the two of you is always rough, with little preparation, and can go on for hours at a time; you don't think you're overtaxing his body- he likes it that way.

#15 - Touch:

You do not make contact with him in public, herding him through streets using only your eyes; in private, however, things are very different- there is not an inch of skin on his body you have not explored.

#16 - Weakness:

He has never won in a training battle because he still has not realized that your finishing blow always strikes the area below his left arm.

#17 - Tears:

He stands over the body of your brother, shaking and breathing erratically, but does not begin to shed tears until you slip an arm around to pull him closer.

#18 - Speed:

"No... stop, it hurts," he gasps, barely coherent over his own cries and whimpers; you ignore him and do the exact opposite.

#19 - Wind:

"You are familiar with the Kazekage," you say, searching his face for a stray emotion, "would you kill him if I asked you to?"

#20 - Freedom:

You have stripped him completely of his independence; he no longer has the freedom to hate you or the freedom to love you.

#21 - Life:

The reason you always force him to deliver the killing blow is because the act of stealing light from someone's eyes is the best way to excite the demon.

#22 - Jealousy:

"You're thinking of Sasuke," you hiss into his ear, tightening your grip around his neck and stroking him faster.

#23 - Hands:

He lets out a cry of pain as Kisame applies ointment to his torn blisters: "But that only makes it worse!"

#24 - Taste:

When you first kissed him, he tasted of ramen; two years later, he hasn't changed.

#25 - Devotion:

They stand, frozen, him between you and Hatake Kakashi, reluctant to fight his former sensei, but even more unwilling to let him hurt you.

#26 - Forever:

"You are mine until you die."

#27 - Blood:

Something red drips from sword in Sasuke's hand, staining the snow, and you see a violent shade of crimson that had nothing to do with the Sharingan.

#28 - Sickness:

You hand him a handkerchief: "The pestilence is still rampant in this country."

#29 - Melody:

The sound of him crying out your name- not your brothers, but yours- in the heat of passion is music to your ears.

#30 - Star:

"The stars are really bright tonight," he says quietly, and you spare him a glance, wondering how long this moment of peace would last.

#31 - Home:

He looks, one last time, toward the lantern-lit streets of Konoha before turning to follow you; at that moment, you knew he would trail you to the end of the worl4d and back, if only you asked.

#32 - Confusion:

"N-Naruto-niisan?!" asks the grandson of the Third, throwing a wild look between him and you, "Why are you with him?!"

#33 - Fear:

He has never had a reason to be frightened of the Demon Fox; then he met you, and now, he's terrified.

#34 - Lightning/Thunder:

The wind howls with a vengeance and you finally decide that his chattering teeth is detrimental to a good night's sleep; seconds later, your jacket lands on top of him and you give him a look, warning him not to ask questions.

#35 - Bonds:

"I can't go back," he whispers in anguish, pressing his face into the crook of your neck: "You're all I have left."

#36 - Market:

You will not trust him to buy food supplies, not until the day he can walk past a ramen stand without giving it a second glance.

#37 - Technology:

Kisame has told you of 'sex toys', but you have no use for them; you have only one instrument and it is good enough for Naruto.

#38 - Gift:

You have taken many things from him: his freedom, his every kiss after the first, his virginity; but you did not take his love- he gave you that willingly.

#39 - Smile:

You did not see the first smile he had in your presence; you felt it as the corner of his lips curled up against the nape of your neck.

#40 - Innocence:

His eyes widen when your semen fills his mouth, and you quietly instruct him to swallow it.

#41 - Completion:

You did not realize how much you missed the three-person teams, not until the higher-ups assigned him to yours; now, you are invincible.

#42 - Clouds:

"My friend used to do this a lot," he says airily, gaze concentrated on the slow-moving puffs of clouds, "it helps him relax, or something."

#43 - Sky:

He is soiled; you have tainted him beyond human imagination, and yet he still spreads his wings in hopes of flying.

#44 - Heaven:

You do not believe him when he tells you, in his hoarse and broken voice, in this dilapidated little shack, that he would rather be here, with you, than anywhere else in the world without.

#45 - Hell:

Sasuke is beside Orochimaru and Naruto is beside you; he, who was formerly stronger than Naruto, and the other, who was formerly stronger than you, are on one side and you make a note to laugh- loudly- at the irony after you destroy them.

#46 - Sun:

There is a reason why Amaterasu is a ninjutsu while Tsukuyomi is a genjutsu, for the sun is truer than the moon the same way Naruto is truer than you.

#47 - Moon:

"...and that is why Tsukuyomi never appears in the sky at the same time as Amaterasu," you finish, and when you find him fast asleep, you realize, with an emotion you cannot explain, that you just told your first bedtime story.
(Note: In Shinto, Amaterasu is the goddess of the Sun, Tsukuyomi is the god of the moon)

#48 - Waves:

He stares, in awe, at the sea of white foam: "I saw the ocean once, and it didn’t look half this good."

#49 - Hair:

"You should be old enough to have something here," you say, amusedly, brushing a finger lightly over his face and his crotch.

#50 - Supernova:

You knew, by then, that any attempts to extract the combined chakra of him and the Kyuubi would be a death wish; you do not tell your superiors, and plan on being in that room with him, because you do not care anymore.

t h e . e n d

Ah, that was the single most angsty piece of work I've ever done. I have new respect for writers of that category now, holy carp. o_O

Anyway, I didn't have anyone beta this thing because I'm not sure exactly if my beta is still willing to beta for me since it's been quite a while since I've written, so if you're confused over the interpretation of a theme, please to tell me. ^^

[Edit: I will respond to comments in approximately 20 hours. =D]


( 39 comments — Leave a comment )
Jan. 25th, 2006 05:40 am (UTC)
Wow, wonderful job with these - and I would haved loved to read more about #11, #41, and #45.
Jan. 26th, 2006 01:28 am (UTC)
Would you really? I plan on incorporating them in another fanfic sometime in the (distant) future. ^^
Jan. 25th, 2006 06:29 am (UTC)
... Wow.

Itachi/Naruto has never been my thing, but you make it seem-- sort of beautiful and awful and real. You pack a great deal of emotion and characterization into such small spaces. Very artful; very good. Thank you.
Jan. 26th, 2006 02:44 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm wholly unworthy of your praise, but very glad you like it. ♥
Jan. 25th, 2006 07:47 am (UTC)
As Alestar said.

11 was a delightful hint. 13 and 17 were devastating. And 50 is a sad and most appropriate ending.

These were lovely. Gonna cry now...
Jan. 26th, 2006 03:55 am (UTC)
Aw, don't cry! Thank you, though. =D
Jan. 25th, 2006 07:55 am (UTC)
... my god that was beautiful. XD; ItaNaru forever!
Jan. 26th, 2006 03:58 am (UTC)
*waves ItaNaru flag* XD
Jan. 25th, 2006 09:48 am (UTC)
I love them all; good job ^_^

My favourites: #33, #45 and #21
Jan. 26th, 2006 04:17 am (UTC)
Thanks! =D
Jan. 25th, 2006 12:14 pm (UTC)
#9 is truly crack :D
#11 made me laugh so hard. OMG, Itachi absolutely looks like weasel.
#19 Damn Itachi, he's just sadistic
#22 OMFG! Breathplay. Died. *q*
#29 That's soooo HOT! >w<
#36 I think Itachi must buy food supplies for the rest of his life. Believe me. You can't separate Naruto and ramen, even Itachi himself.
#37 Rolling on the floor laughing my ass out. Very, very naughty.
#40 Nosebleed. Someone pass me tissue boxes!
#47 OMG! So CUTE! Wonder if any parents wanna hire such a creepy babysitter like Itachi.
Jan. 26th, 2006 04:33 am (UTC)
*bows* Haha, I'm glad this could make you laugh (and nosebleed, and ...die). XD
Jan. 25th, 2006 01:48 pm (UTC)
That was amazing.

Never been a fan of Ita/Naru but now.. wow, you really got me believing zhisd pairing.. and I loved the Sasunaru hints you strew into it here and there.. makes the whole thing even more beautiful.

I'm in love. This is so going into my memories!

Jan. 26th, 2006 04:51 am (UTC)
Thank you! And aye, it's true, you can't have ItaNaru without a hint of SasuNaru. Still, if I can get even one person to reconsider ItaNaru, as you have... >D
Jan. 25th, 2006 04:54 pm (UTC)
ugh, these were so... itachi. i loved this. it was lovelier because it was in his POV. what i really enjoyed from you was that most of the time, you didn't incorporate the word into the sentence. and sometimes, the way you interpreted the word was genius. i wouldn't have thought of the word in such a way, until i read your sentence it and it would make a lot of sense. this may have been angsty, but its the good kind of angsty. plus, with itachi, there couldn't be any other way.

oh, i really liked the technology one. its the first time any one had thought of using it like that. smart ^__^
Jan. 26th, 2006 05:01 am (UTC)
I'm glad you noticed! I tried not to use the actual theme word because it'd get too restricting if I did. Plus I wanted to experiment with an Itachi POV since I've never actually wrote one out of third-person. ♥

The technology one actually gave me the most trouble; then I thought "How would this translate to sex?" and it magically came out. XD
Jan. 25th, 2006 09:27 pm (UTC)
That was sooo good. I loved it.
Jan. 26th, 2006 05:03 am (UTC)
Yay! ^^
Jan. 25th, 2006 09:31 pm (UTC)
wowz, they are pretty great. 02,04,07,11,19,27,32,35 were my favourites (i love gaara-chan and even though 19 temporarily made my heart stopped it was beautifully written)
Jan. 26th, 2006 05:07 am (UTC)
Thank you! Gaara was the first thing that came to mind when I read 'Wind' and somehow my train of thought led to... ya. ^^;
Jan. 26th, 2006 04:09 am (UTC)
This shows how much can be potrayed in one sentance. This was amazing. 13, 17 and 50 were great.
Jan. 26th, 2006 05:14 am (UTC)
Thanks! =D
Jan. 26th, 2006 12:00 pm (UTC)
great job, not a pairing i read a lot of but i enjoyed this. i liked the second person approach. i liked #39 a lot.
Jan. 29th, 2006 07:36 am (UTC)
Thank you! 2nd Person is something I love experimenting with. ^^
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Jan. 29th, 2006 07:39 am (UTC)
♥ I'm honored! XD
Jan. 29th, 2006 07:25 am (UTC)

BEAUTIFUL!!! BEAUTIFUL!!! I cry reading this. I'm sooo bookmarking this ^__^

#01 - Comfort and #02 - Kiss: So Itachi!
#03 - Soft: Hahaha, no worries. Kyuu-chan will get his part as well *coughs*
#04 - Pain: Wow, THAT's just intense.
#05 - Potatoes: Hahaha, I can picture Itachi as a mother who's telling her son to eat vegetables. No matter what XD
#06 - Rain: Kinda, reminding with Wave Arc. The bridge incident. But, this is ItaNaru version *Banzai*
#07 - Chocolate: Again, so Itachi!
#08 - Happiness: I think it's better if Naruto doesn't think THAT well. If he does, he will be leaving poor It-chan alone.
#09 - Telephone: Poor illiterate Naru-chan *huggles*
#10 - Ears: All pain's too much to bear in the beginning after all.
#11 - Name: XD This is hillarious. THough, I'm wondering what the topic was.
#12 - Sensual: Wow, I just love it.
#13 - Death: Fyuh! That's just plain awesome.
#14 - Sex: Thank to Kyu-chan, Naru-chan can go on for hours. But what about days? *hentai*
#15 - Touch: Oooo, marking Naru-chan over and over again ne, It-chan.
#16 - Weakness: OMG, this is so sad. Is it the same exact spot in which Sasuke stabbed Naruto with Chidori?
#17 - Tears: "He's my Uke!" Itachi glares.
#18 - Speed: Lovely! Was it punishment? Absolutely not a make up sex ne.
#19 - Wind: NOOOO, GAARAAAA...
#20 - Freedom: Beautiful. That's so Itachi.
#21 - Life: Clever! Kill two birds with one stone.
#22 - Jealousy: Go, It-chan go!
#23 - Hands: *smacks Kisame on the head*
#24 - Taste: That's Naru-chan for you.
#25 - Devotion: I wanna know the continuation *glomps*
#26 - Forever: What a possesive bunch, both of them!
#27 - Blood: Hehe, It-chan worries ne.
#28 - Sickness: Just admit it that you care, Itachi *smirks*
#29 - Melody: Is someone jealous? *jabs Itachi in the ribs then I'm dead*
#30 - Star: Oh, so romantic.
#31 - Home: Farewell always be one of the hardest to do. A minor typo in here.
#32 - Confusion: Ahahaha, I understand why Konohamaru scared shitless.
#33 - Fear: Awesome!
#34 - Lightning/Thunder: Hoho, someone's in denial! Luv it.
#35 - Bonds: That's so sad. Then again, Naruto never have anything in the world imo if we look carefully
#36 - Market: I guess, I can't blame Itachi for not liking ramen like Naru-chan does.
#37 - Technology: Oh god, this is priceless!!! You're genius, woman.
#38 - Gift: Love must be given willingly otherwise Naruto will be sadder ;(
#39 - Smile: Oh, so suggestive!
#40 - Innocence: Hahaha, I can imagine, Naruto freaked out after giving Itachi the job
#41 - Completion:
#42 - Clouds: KYAA, Shikamaru ♥ Itachi and Naruto cloud watching.
#43 - Sky: imo, Naruto can portray anything if he wanted. Since he has quite a mask.
#44 - Heaven: "Heaven is on earth." I'm thinking about shack up *laughs*
#45 - Hell: Hooo, plotbunnies ^_^ I so want to read this kind of fic. Must be interesting ne.
#46 - Sun: Wonderful metaphor.
#47 - Moon: A storyteller, Itachi *shudders*
#48 - Waves:
#49 - Hair: Again, awesomeness when you managed to slip humor in between angstiness.
#50 - Supernova: The only salvation left for them I think.

Thank you for the wonderful installment.

~ m a y ~
Jan. 29th, 2006 08:09 am (UTC)
... =O

You really went all out, wow! I'm so happy you noticed #16! No one said anything about that and I was worried maybe it was too vague. ^^;

#45 was going to be something in Mind Games, my 'chaptered' ItaNaru fic that (so far) is still a oneshot. I will write that in, sometime in the distant future, so you might read the backstory yet. =D

So... thank you for your replies!! XD
Jan. 29th, 2006 08:27 am (UTC)
Yup, I need a good dose of ItaNaru in my syetem ^_~ and about #16 yes, I had to read it twice. <
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Yup, I need a good dose of ItaNaru in my syetem ^_~ and about #16 yes, I had to read it twice. <<Uh, under left arm? What. What?>> Then I remember left arm-> left chest *gasps*

I'm thinking of something akin to, "... always strikes the area below his left shoulder, close to his heart." *shrugs* if you think that can clear up the vagueness however, that part is awesome already. The concept alone is heartwrenching.

In fact, I'm confused with #11 *scratches head* 'nyways hops off to read Mind Games.
Jan. 30th, 2006 06:57 am (UTC)
Jan. 30th, 2006 08:12 am (UTC)

~ m a y ~
Jan. 30th, 2006 09:10 pm (UTC)
Would totally give it to you if I had it! TT__TT I have the site link but she no longer puts up her art!
Jan. 30th, 2006 04:58 am (UTC)
Wow. This was...excellent!!! Brilliant! I would never be able to do something with a word (well, maybe a drabble, but not a sentence!!) They're all well crafted and connect with eachother!! (Even the potatoes XD) I love it :D Keep up the GREAT work. Hurray for ItaNaru!! <3
Jan. 31st, 2006 12:16 am (UTC)
Re: !!!!
Thank you! The potatoe one was a little roadblock, but it worked out in the end. ♥
Jan. 30th, 2006 06:59 am (UTC)

Post this on the Itanaru comm? X333!
Jan. 30th, 2006 08:14 am (UTC)
ME TOO! MARRY ME. Then have babies, making more ItaNaru fans. THREESOMES ANYONE?

She did. I stumbled here via itanaru comm :) and again, your icon is ♥

~ m a y ~
Jan. 30th, 2006 09:10 pm (UTC)

tee hee~ XD
Jan. 31st, 2006 12:15 am (UTC)
I was waiting for you to read this thing, woman! S'like... "where's muffin?" XD
Feb. 1st, 2006 10:05 am (UTC)

Sep. 7th, 2007 08:20 pm (UTC)
I haven't read/watched the entire series (I know, it's STILL ongoing) but if half of these things happen I will be most satisfied. Screw Sasuke and Sakura--Itachi/Naruto should be canon!
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